Monday, June 21, 2021

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     Sports VS Music

                              By Tessa Webb 

                                  21 . 6 . 2021 


Do you think music is better than sports? Well, let me tell you.


Well what I originally think is that sports are way better than music. Because sports are fun, physical and it keeps you fit and healthy.


The reason why I haven’t chosen music is because I play sports and I know how it feels. The sports I play are Football, Swimming, Gymnastics and surf life saving. I’ll run you through 3 good reasons why sports are way better.


Firstly, sports is something everyone can try.Secondly, It’s interactive, physical and fun. Finally, you burn calories and lose weight and sports are definitely not every single day of the week.


Now I’ll run you through 3 good reasons why music is not as good and fun as sports.


Firstly, music is not as physical as sports and you don’t get to interact with many people.Secondly, It’s not as common as sports you don’t burn calories either.And finally, It’s kind of boring when you do it everyday and learn the same songs a million times a day.

When you do sports like gymnastics, football or surf lifesaving you burn calories, lose weight and get way stronger.


When you do music it doesn’t really do anything; you just learn new songs,piano keys,notes or strings. You learn sports way faster than music.


 Music is fun  in some ways, but I still think that sports like swimming,gymnastics, hockey,football,rugby,squash,netball and even surf lifesaving are way better.


Music is kind of like a sport but not exactly even though music is not as interactive as sports  I do find music fun but its not as fun as sports.


Music doesn’t burn calories,lose weight and it doesn’t make you get strong like sports does.


Still in my opinion I still think sports is way better than music!!  




1 comment:

  1. Hi Tessa I really like this post and it is so detailed and you have a lot of punctuation you could cut down some of the sentence is but because it is a bit long but otherwise it is great.

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