12 things in Olafs pocket .
In Olafs pocket you will find : 6 snow geese to keep him company; an invite ,for Elsa's coronation ; an umbrella ,for on hot sunny days so he doesn’t melt ; an a spare flurry, just in case ; a bag of marshmallows, for extra hot chocolates ; a picture of Elsa & Anna , so when he is away he can think of them; 12 balls of snow , so if he starts to melt he can add more snow onto him; extra carrots so if Sven eats his carrot nose; 2 extra pairs of sticks ,for his arms ; a phone number on a piece of paper to ring the palace ; a extra mug for hot chocolate ; his favorite purple coloured flower to keep him happy . By Tessa Webb .
My reflective comment : I tried to use more semicolons in my story 12 things in Olaf's pocket .
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